My story is about a pig. A baby pig. He looks back on the night where he last saw his father, the farmers take him away, and then he hears fathers cries for help, along with some screeching noises. The screeching noise happens to be the chainsaw that sliced his father. The baby pig always sits outside his barn, each day all day, hoping Dad kept his promise and come back for him. Daddy will come back, i know he will, he always says. His mother didnt want to tell him what happened that night, she only wanted to protect him, and keep him happy. The baby pig doesnt know what bacon, ham, sausage or death means. Later his mother was killed, he heard the same noise.(chainsaw). Then at the end of the story, he was killed
What do you think, I wanna make this story as sad as possible. I want to hear sympathy, and see peopole cry.
Do you have any ideas?
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